my prediction for the force

Mum, Dad, Harper, and Max went for a picnic. They stumbled across a wooden bridge then splash, they fell into the water like a human cannonball. Harper was scared because he couldn't swim. So Harper he screamed like little children. Max was being a pushy kid and hassling  Harper for not knowing how to swim. Harper excused himself and went to the toilet to hide his shame.  Then Harper wished he was like Yoda since he was mighty and respected. Suddenly Yoda appeared and harper had a discussion with him then jumped up in joy and he felt great.

Score

We got a 1/10 because we got one thing correct which was when Harper went to the toilet to hide the shame. Everything else was wrong.