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good job max.next time describe in more detail .eg it would taste like a delectable ice cream. you could add this to the end melting in my mouth or you could add delectable ice cream oozing in my mouth with delight.
AMAZING MAX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i like how you put heaps of things to describe confidence well. next time control your capita letters
good job max.next time describe in more detail .eg it would taste like a delectable ice cream. you could add this to the end melting in my mouth or you could add delectable ice cream oozing in my mouth with delight.
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