Thursday, October 17, 2019

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  1. good job max.next time describe in more detail .eg it would taste like a delectable ice cream. you could add this to the end melting in my mouth or you could add delectable ice cream oozing in my mouth with delight.

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  2. AMAZING MAX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i like how you put heaps of things to describe confidence well. next time control your capita letters

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